” these violent delights have violent ends” Said Frair Lawrence when Juliet and Romeo were getting married . He is saying that these to lovers are having a delightful lives but ,marrying each other will end in misery and death
Fate is revealed in Romeo and Juliet in many ways,but one of the most important is through the plot device of co-incidence,for example Romeo only found his true love Juliet from a co-incidence when him and Benvolio were walking down the street and luckily saw a servant who couldn’t read or write
November 16, 2012 at 5:24 pm
This is moving in the right direction.
You have done well to integrate the compulsory elements yet still maintain a fluency (or, flow) in your paragraph. There are still a couple of small fragments to attend to – for example, can you see the problem in this sentence:
“He is saying that these to lovers are having a delightful lives but ,marrying each other will end in misery and death”?
I look forward to reading this paragraph again when it is completed.
CW